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提问:yzw89210
级别:幼儿园
来自:中国

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已解决的问题 请问我写的这篇作文到底应不应该的22分
这是关于写一本新电视节目的开播的,要点我保证全部都写到了.
Amecican Life--a new English teaching program will show on the TV soon.It is made by Channel Two of CCTV.As an English program, it provides a lot of useful knowlegde for students who study English.
Improving students' English level is the purpose of this program. Because it is a convenient way for students to know more about Americans' life. I am sure that students will be interested in it. What is more,it is also a beneficial way to help students learn to express themselves in English,this is the most important.
This program is going to start on January 3,2005.Everyday,you can watch it on afternoon from 5:00 to 5:30. If you missed it,don't worry, you can watch the re-shows on the next day from 9:00to 9:30 in the morning.
I think that every student will enjoy it very much.

不知道高考时如果不考虑书写问题能得几分.
 提问时间:2007-06-05 17:26:11    评论举报
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回答:camnew
级别:四年级

2007-06-05 17:44:27
来自:湖南省衡阳市
Improving students' English level is the purpose of this program.

头太大了~~
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回答:anliang
级别:一年级

2007-06-05 17:30:35
来自:浙江省温州市
有20分的啦,放心吧。。。。。
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回答:薅嫼爾
级别:二年级

2007-06-05 17:34:26
来自:河北省唐山市
不考虑书写应该可以到22分左右,如果书写在规范一点,应该可以到24分吧。
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回答:houyingquan
级别:幼儿园

2007-06-05 17:45:12
来自:陕西省咸阳市
语法错误少.25分继续努力
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回答:活着就知足
级别:高一

2007-06-05 19:06:59
来自:江西省上饶市
还是不错的,可以得到20-22分,要是不介意我再帮你稍作修改,可能会好些.你要注意的是,可以尽量将两个简单句用连词连接起来.再注意一下细节.
Amecican Life--a new English teaching program will show on the TV soon.Produced by CCTV-2, it will provide a lot of useful knowlegde for English learners.Intended to improve the students'English level, it is a convenient way for students to know more about Americans' life. What is more,it is also a beneficial way to help students learn to express themselves in English.I am sure that students will be interested in it.
This program is going to start on January 3,2005.You can watch it 5:00 to 5:30 every afternoon. If you miss it,don't worry, you can watch the re-shows the next day from 9:00to 9:30 in the morning.
I think that every student will enjoy it very much.
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回答:PANDASUN
级别:幼儿园

2007-06-13 17:56:04
来自:江苏省盐城市
CHANNEL TWO OF CCTV这个可以直接写成CCTV-2的
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回答:不会飞翔的鹏
级别:八年级

2007-06-16 18:15:00
来自:四川省南充市
我认为20分左右吧,不过前提是书写较好。
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回答:bobofan_2008
级别:一年级

2007-07-02 11:23:05
来自:APNIC
20分--22分.句型和词汇用的都比较到位,要点也应该囊括了吧~关键是结构上略显不够紧凑.
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