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|提问时间：2008-08-03 22:52:06 评论 ┆ 举报|
| 1.human being改为human beings,因为human being强调“个人”，human being强调“人群,人们human强调“人群”.|
2.As is well known用法正确不应该修改
3.it is terrible absolutely for us not to have money改为:
it is absolutely terrible for us if we dont have money.
4.but whatever how you say and how to do改为:
no matter what you say and what you do
6.How much money which people have is a rich man?改为:
How much money should you have if you want to be a rich man ?
7.The different treatments to money 改为The different opinions on money 表示观点,看法时最好用opinion,而不用treatments一般表示对待某事物(某人),招待,款待的意思.
8.the mind of people how to deal with money.改为:
the method of dealing with money.
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| To human being,money is very important.As well known, money is not everything, but it is terrible that we not have money. |
You can say that money can not buy everything you want, but whatever what you say and what you do, money is still in the center of our lives.
How much money that people have being a rich man? The same amount of money to different people have different answers. The different treatments to money doesn’t depend on the difference of people’s real wealth, but the mind that people how to deal with money.
In a word, we cant overly concerned about gain or loss money, or you will lose more things than you have.
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