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提问:kevinlymon
级别:大四
来自:四川省

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已解决的问题 英语日记 请老师帮我批改这篇日记,如果有错误,请老师讲解!
From today on,I begin to write diary in English,at least in one week to write 5 articles.
exercise their own,please have a look in my diary,if there is an error,please help me to
point out,thank you.

从今天起,我开始用英语写日记,每周至少写5篇文章,锻炼自己,请看我的日记中,如果有错误,请帮我指出,谢谢!
I very like watching TV,I like watching《The Walking Dead》《Vampire diaries》and《Nikita》,
I think watching TV,I Not only can according to captions to learn English,but also can
practice listening,also enjoyed the film
我非常喜欢看美剧,我喜欢看《行尸走肉》《吸血鬼日记》还有《尼基塔》
我觉得看美剧,我不但可以根据字幕学习英语,而且也可以练习听力,还欣赏到了电影。
 提问时间:2011-12-01 14:27:05    评论举报
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回答:llzgeorge
级别:二级教员


2011-12-01 14:55:49
来自:问吧专家团
把你的英语部分修改一下,请参考:
From today on,I begin to keep a diary in English,and at least in one week I will write 5 articles.Please have a look at my diary. If there is any error,please help me.Thank you.
I like watching TV very much, and especially I like watching The Walking Dead, Vampire diaries and Nikita I think watching TV can not only learn English according to captions but also ractice listening. In additon, I can enjoy the film.
就像汉语写作一样,英语写作也需要字斟句酌,但是不要与汉语完全对译,要讲究在符合英语习惯的前提下的通顺。
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非常感谢老师的帮助,纠正一个 小小单词的错误,呵呵 那个In additon 应该是 In addition 是漏打的!!
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回答:话多
级别:三年级

2011-12-01 16:19:07
来自:浙江省台州
每天写英语日志是提高英语水平的好办法!值得借鉴!
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