Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby
【写作迁移训练】
假如你是李华,你校英文校报向全校学生征集主题为“Do you collect anything?”的英语短文,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇短文投稿。
收藏项目 | 鸟叫声(sounds of birds) |
开始时间及原因 | 两年前:参加学校收藏俱乐部(Collecting Club)的一次森林之行,各种鸟叫吸引了你 |
收获与感想 | …… |
要求:
1.词数不少于90(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.条理清楚,语句连贯,书写规范;
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
【写作提示】
1.主题:介绍自己的收藏项目
2.人称:以第一人称为主
3.时态:一般现在时、一般过去时
4.要点:收藏项目、开始时间及原因、收获与感想
5.写作思路:开头点明自己的收藏项目,然后具体介绍开始该收藏的时间及原因,最后表达收获与感想。
【范文赏读】
Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.
Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school’s Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen(录音笔). Now I’ve collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.
This is my collection. What do you think of it?
(文中加粗部分为亮点短语或句式)