【Unit 8】教材帮七上英语-沪教牛津版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 8  Collecting as a hobby

写作迁移训练

    假如你是李华,你校英文校报向全校学生征集主题为“Do you collect anything?”的英语短文,请你根据下面的提示,写一篇短文投稿。

收藏项目

鸟叫声(sounds of birds

开始时间及原因

两年前:参加学校收藏俱乐部(Collecting Club一次森林之行,各种鸟叫吸引了你

收获与感想

……

   要求:

1.词数不少于90(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;

3.条理清楚,语句连贯,书写规范;

4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

This is my collection. What do you think of it?

 

【写作提示】

1.主题:介绍自己的收藏项目

2.人称:以第一人称为主

3.时态:一般现在时、一般过去时

4.要点:收藏项目、开始时间及原因、收获与感想

5.写作思路:开头点明自己的收藏项目,然后具体介绍开始该收藏的时间及原因,最后表达收获与感想。

 

【范文赏读】

Do you collect anything? You may like collecting stamps, postcards or magazines. Well, I collect sounds of birds.

Two years ago, I took a trip to the forest with my school’s Collection Club. When I went into the forest, all kinds of birds attracted me. It felt like I was in a dream world. All kinds of sounds of birds were like beautiful music. They made me lose myself in it. Since then, I have collected sounds of birds through the digital recording pen录音笔. Now I’ve collected a lot of sounds of birds. By listening to them, I feel the beauty of nature, which makes me very relaxed.

    This is my collection. What do you think of it?

(文中加粗部分为亮点短语或句式)


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