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来自:贵州省贵阳市

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Dear Jim,
It’s great to receive your email. I attended a 14-day Summer Camp for learning English in Australia. Now I’d like to tell you something about my trip.
In the first day, July 20th, we spent six hours in the flight. Late in the next morning, on our arrival in Sydney, the largest city of Australia, we were warmly welcomed. And then we lived in the local families.
In the 11 days followed, we not only received the lessons but also took a various kinds of activities during our spare time. For example, we paid a visit to some places of interest as well as the zoo which kept many rare animals such as kangaroos and koalas.
We ended the trip next day and sat sail to our country. Although it’s not a long time trip, I have learned a lot from it and I really enjoyed it.
Yours,
Li Hua
 提问时间:2007-10-14 14:45:55    评论举报
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回答:麦子
级别:学士

2007-10-14 19:48:39
来自:浙江省嘉兴市
Dear Jim,
long time no see.i'm glad to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something about my trip during my holiday.
I attended to a 14-day Summer Camp to learn English in Australia. on the first day, July 20th, we spent six hours on the palne. Late in the next morning, we arrived in Sydney, the largest city of Australia, we were warmly welcomed. And then we stayed in some local families.
during the next 11days , we not only received many lessons but also took a various kinds of activities in our spare time. For example, we paid a visit to some places of interest such as a zoo which kept many rare animals like kangaroos and koalas.
We ended the trip the next day and sat sail to our country. Although it’s not a long trip, I have learned a lot and I really enjoyed it vey much.
Yours,
Li Hua
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回答:yangxiaomeng
级别:二年级

2007-10-14 17:09:30
来自:河北省邯郸市
Dear Jim,
It’s so great to receive your e-mail. I attended a 14-day Summer Camp for learning English in Australia. Now I’d like to tell you something about my trip.
On the first day, July the 20th, we spent six hours on flight. Late in the next morning, on our arrival in Sydney, the largest city of Australia, we were warmly welcomed. And then we stayed in the local families.
In the 11 days followed, we not only received the lessons but also took part in a various kinds of activities during our spare time. For example, we paid a visit to some places of interest such as the zoo which kept many rare animals such as kangaroos and koalas.
We ended up the trip the next day and sat sail to our country. Although it’s not a long time trip, I have learned a lot from it and I really enjoyed it.
Yours,
li hua

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级别:幼儿园

2007-10-20 19:16:29
来自:江苏省盐城市
Dear Jim,
It’s great to receive your email. I attended a 14-day Summer Camp for learning English in Australia. Now I’d like to tell you something about my trip.
On the first day, July 20th, we spent six hours in the flight. Late in the next morning, on our arrival in Sydney, the largest city of Australia, we were warmly welcomed. And then we lived in the local families.
In the 11 days followed, we not only received the lessons but also took a various kinds of activities during our spare time. For example, we paid a visit to some places of interest ,as well as the zoo which kept many rare animals such as kangaroos and koalas.
We ended the trip the next day and set sail to our country. Although it’s not a long time trip, I have learned a lot from it and I really enjoyed it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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