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范文赏读1：

      I stood on the field of the high jumping competition. I felt myriad eyes staring at me, panic creeping up in my heart without my awareness. Even though Mr. White had stretched the criteria, I was still the only girl to enter this competition, which was engulfed by floods of boys. But I quickly pulled myself out of the negative mood. Come on, girl! Wasn’t I standing here to prove to everyone that I could do better than some boys? How could I chicken out? When it was my turn, I took a deep breath, closed my eyes, and launched myself into the air. When I landed on the other side gracefully, thunderous applause erupted.

        To my surprise, some of the cheers I got were from boys! They didn’t seem at all to show any bit of reluctance to welcome my success in their exclusive event. I got the silver medal, but the outcome no longer mattered to me. I knew my ultimate goal had been achieved. Either gender has the right to do whatever they want. It could never and ever shackle any longing heart to participate. Gender is meant to distinguish which side of the public lavatory you go into, not success.

范文赏读2：

     I stood on the field of the high jumping competition. For a moment deadly silence ruled over the playground. Digesting the doubt and shocked looks thrown at me, I stared solemnly at the bar. After taking a moment to compose myself, I took off and launched myself into the air. Embraced in the breeze, I felt like I was gifted a pair of wings. I cleared the bar neatly! The next minutes witnessed the bar rising higher and higher and the gold-chasers becoming fewer and fewer until only I remained. After my breathtaking performance finally ended solely, the crowd burst into waves of thunderous applause and cheered heartily.

        To my surprise, some of the cheers I got were from boys! “You’ve won, fair and square!” “Perfect show!”... Those cheers were such pleasant music to my ears! The headmaster announced me as the gold medalist personally, saying that girls were no longer excluded from any event. It was then that I knew what I had crossed was not only the bar but also the boundaries that once seemed impossible to cross. It was not only about high jumping, but about the courage to fight against bias and go for what girls deserve.