【Unit3】教材帮七上英语-外研版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 3  Family ties

写作迁移训练

假设你是李华,你校英语杂志社正在举办亲子空间”征稿活动。请你“An unforgettable family experience”为题,根据以下提示,用英语写一篇文章投稿。

提示:

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要求

1. 包含图中所有内容,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2. 文中不得出现真实人名或地名;

3. 词数应不少于100

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【写作提示】

1. 主题:家庭活动经历

2. 人称:第一人称

3. 时态:以一般过去时为主

4. 要点:时间、地点、人物、做了什么、感受如何

5. 写作思路:开头部分简单点明是哪次经历中间部分描述家人一起做了什么,以及如何做的;最后介绍自己的收获和感受

 

【范文赏读】

An unforgettable family experience

Last summer, my family went on a camping trip to a nearby forest. It was an experience that I will never forget.

We put up our tent under the shade/ʃeɪd/阴凉处of tall trees and spent the day enjoying the beautiful nature around us. We also collected some beautiful leaves and stones. In the evening, we built a campfire and sat around it, sharing stories and laughter.

During this experience, I felt very happy and relaxed. Being away from the hustle/ˈhʌsl/ and bustle /ˈbʌsl/熙熙攘攘of city life made me feel peaceful. From this experience, I learned the importance of spending time with loved ones and enjoying the simple things in life. This camping trip was not only an unforgettable family experience but also a valuable lesson for me.

(文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式)

 


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