【Unit 5】教材帮七下英语-译林版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 5 Animal friends

【写作迁移训练】

假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom得知你最近养了只兔子当宠物, 想多了解它的相关信息。请根据下面表格中的内容,写一90词左右的电子邮件回复

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Name

Jimmy

Age

2 years old

Looks

long ears, red eyes, a short tail…

Food

vegetables, fruit

Activities

run after me, play on the grass

注意事项:

1. 邮件须包含表格中所有内容,可以适当发挥

2. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数

3. 请勿在文中出现自己真实姓名和校名。

Dear Tom,

How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please tell me about your pet in the next email.

Yours,

Li Hua


【写作提示】

1.主题:介绍宠物

2.人称:第一人称、第三人称

3.时态:一般现在时

4.要点:兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、所吃的食物、活动、你的感受等

5.写作思路:开篇引出介绍的宠物对象(已给出);接着根据表格提示详细介绍兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、所吃的食物及喜爱的活动等,并表达自己的感受;结尾部分已给出。

【范文赏读】

Dear Tom,

How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.

His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. Hes very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favourite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass.We have so much fun together.I think he is the best pet in the world.

Please tell me about your pet in the next email.

Yours,

Li Hua

(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)

 

 


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