Unit 1 Animal Friends
写作迁移训练
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom得知你最近养了只兔子当宠物, 想多了解它的相关信息。请根据以下表格,写一篇90词左右的回信。
| Name | Jimmy |
Age | 2 years old | |
Looks | long ears, red eyes, a short tail | |
Food | vegetables, fruit | |
Activities | run after me, play on the grass |
注意事项:
1. 短文须包含表格中所有内容,可以适当发挥。
2. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Tom,
How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.
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Please tell me about your pet in the next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作提示】
1.主题:介绍宠物
2.人称:以第三人称为主
3.时态:一般现在时
4.要点:兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物、活动、你对它的感情等
5.写作思路:开篇引出介绍的对象(已给出);接着详细介绍兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物及喜爱的活动等,并表达自己对它的感情;结尾表达期待对方回信(已给出)。
【范文赏读】
Dear Tom,
How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.
His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. He’s very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favourite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass. We have so much fun together. I think he is the best pet in the world.
Please tell me about your pet in the next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)