【Unit 1】教材帮七下英语-人教版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 1 Animal Friends

写作迁移训练

假如你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom得知你最近养了只兔子当宠物, 想多了解它的相关信息。请根据以下表格,写一篇90词左右的回

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Name

Jimmy

Age

2 years old

Looks

long ears, red eyes, a short tail

Food

vegetables, fruit

Activities

run after me, play on the grass

注意事项:

1. 短文包含表格中所有内容,可以适当发挥。

2. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Dear Tom,

How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Please tell me about your pet in the next email.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作提示】

1.主题:介绍宠物

2.人称:以第三人称为主

3.时态:一般现在时

4.要点:兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物、活动、你对它的感情等

5.写作思路:开篇引出介绍的对象(已给出);接着详细介绍兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物及喜爱的活动等,并表达自己对它的感情;结尾表达期待对方回信(已给出)。

【范文赏读】

Dear Tom,

How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit.

His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. Hes very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favourite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass. We have so much fun together. I think he is the best pet in the world.

Please tell me about your pet in the next email.

Yours,

Li Hua

(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)


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