Unit 1 Home

【写作迁移训练】

假如你是李华，下周你的朋友尼克将来南京游玩，你想邀请他来参观你的家。请根据下面思维导图中的提示，给尼克写一封电子邮件介绍你的家。

要求： 1.文章应包含导图中的所有信息，可适当发挥；

       2.语句通顺流畅，文章结构清晰；

       3.90词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Nick,

I’m happy to know that you will come to Nanjing next week. I’d like to invite you to visit my home.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I love my home and welcome to my home!

All the best,

Li Hua

【写作提示】

1.主题：介绍自己的家

2.人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主

3.时态：一般现在时

4.要点：家的位置，家庭成员，主要房间，活动及个人感受

5.写作思路：开篇介绍家的具体位置，主体部分详细介绍家庭成员、房屋布局及家庭活动等，结尾表达个人感受。

【范文赏读】

Dear Nick,

I’m happy to know that you will come to Nanjing next week. I’d like to invite you to visit my home. My home is near the centre of Nanjing. It’s next to my school and there are some shopping malls around here.

I live with my parents in a large flat on the twelfth floor. There is a living room, four bedrooms and a study in my home. Our living room is big and bright. We can sit on the sofa and have fun watching films on TV there. My bedroom has a balcony. I always enjoy the beautiful view outside. I like the study the most because I can do my homework and read my favourite books there.

I love my home and welcome to my home!

All the best,

Li Hua

(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式）