【Unit 5】教材帮七上英语-沪教牛津版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 5 Off to space

写作迁移训练

假如你是丹尼尔,生活在火星上。你的朋友约翰现在生活在地球上,不久也将来火星生活。请给约翰写一封信,从学习、生活、环境等方面描述火星上的情况。

注意:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

Dear John,

Now, Im writing a letter to you on Mars.Its really wonderful to live on Mars.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Well, I hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Daniel

【写作提示】

1.主题:火星上的生活

2.人称:第一人称和第三人称

3.时态:一般现在时

4.要点:火星上的学习、生活、环境等

5.写作思路:开篇先对火星上的生活进行总体评价,接着从学习、生活、环境等方面进行具体描述,最后表达对约翰到来的期待。

 

【范文赏读】

Dear John,

Now, Im writing a letter to you on Mars.Its really wonderful to live on Mars.

I think life on Mars is more interesting than that on Earth. We have virtual schools instead of real ones. We do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates in the virtual school at home. Most of our homework is done by robots so that we can have more time for hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and colourful flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood.They make our life easier.

Well, I hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Daniel

(文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式)

 


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