【Unit 2】教材帮七下英语-译林版-写作迁移训练
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Unit 2 Neighbourhood

【写作迁移训练】

幸福社区积极参与和谐社区建设活动,社区涌现出一大批志愿者。假如叫张华,是该社区的一员,请根据以下导图The volunteers in our community为题写一篇短文介绍该社区的志愿者情况

要求:1.100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数

2.必须包括导图中所有内容,适当发挥。

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The volunteers in our community

I’m Zhang Hua. I live in Xingfu Community. The neighbours in our community are kind and helpful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

We are all very happy to live here.

【写作提示】

1.主题:介绍社区志愿者

2.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主

3.时态:一般现在时

4.要点:社区志愿者的身份职业、志愿者所做的工作、你的感受

5.写作思路:开篇简单介绍本区情况(已给出),然后根据导图提示从区志愿者的身份职业和服务项目等方面介绍志愿者所从事的活动,最后表达个人感受(已给出)

【范文赏读】

The volunteers in our community

I’m Zhang Hua. I live in Xingfu Community. The neighbours in our community are kind and helpful.

There are many volunteers in our community. They have different jobs. Some of them are engineers, some are doctors, some are nurses and some are college students. We also have policemen and artists here. They are willing to share their different skills. If there is something wrong with your computer or fridge, the engineers will help you. The doctors and nurses can help look after the old. The college students often have a party with us. We sing and dance together. If we have problems with our homework, they will also offer to help us.

We are all very happy to live here.

(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)

 

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