【写作迁移训练】
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jim想来你的家乡旅游,但他不知道哪个季节来最好。请根据以下提示给Jim写一封电子邮件介绍一下你家乡的四季。
内容包括:
(1)四季的气候特点;
(2)人们在不同季节里的活动。
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
(3)词数90左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jim,
I am very glad you will come to my hometown________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作提示】
1.主题:介绍家乡的四季
2.人称:第一人称和第三人称
3.时态:一般现在时
4.要点:四季的气候特点、人们在不同季节里的活动
5.写作思路:开篇引出话题,中间介绍家乡四季的气候特点及人们的活动,结尾表达祝福。
【范文赏读】
Dear Jim,
I am very glad you will come to my hometown Shenyang. Now let me tell you something about the four seasons in Shenyang.
Everything is alive in spring.It is great to exercise outdoors. We can climb a mountain and fly kites because it’s warm and sunny. In summer, it’s a perfect time to enjoy ice cream on a hot day. Sometimes I go to the beach with my family. I like building sandcastles there with my little sister. Autumn is a wonderful season for picking ripe fruit. Farmers are busy harvesting crops. As the days become shorter, the temperature drops. It’s quite cold in winter, and we often wear warm clothes to keep warm. I can make snowmen and have snowball fights with my friends.
I hope you can have a good time in my hometown Shenyang.
Yours,
Li Hua
(文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式)