Unit 7 Outdoor fun
【写作迁移训练】
假定你是李华,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动,你的外国笔友Annie对这次活动很感兴趣,请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封回信,分享活动过程和感受。
| A School Trip Date:June 23rd Place:Happy Farm Activities: ·plant seeds(种子) ·make dumplings ·pick fruits ·... Feelings:... |
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Annie,
I would like to share the interesting experience with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作提示】
1.主题:学校实践活动
2.人称:以第一人称为主
3.时态:一般过去时
4.要点:实践活动的时间、地点、活动内容及感受
5.写作思路:开篇引出话题,主体部分按照时间顺序详细介绍实践活动的内容和感受,结尾表达感悟并总结。
【范文赏读】
Dear Annie,
I would like to share the interesting experience with you.
Last Sunday on June 23rd, our class went on a school trip to Happy Farm. In the morning, we learnt how to plant seeds. It was a new experience for me. Then we made dumplings for lunch. They tasted delicious. In the afternoon, not only did we pick some fruits, but also we went to the stable(马厩) and fed the horses. It was so exciting to be close to these lovely animals. After that, we took a walk around the farm and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.
I learnt a lot from this trip. I realized the importance of getting close to nature. It was truly a great day.
Yours,
Li Hua
(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)