Unit 5 Here and Now
写作迁移训练
现在是课外活动时间,看看你的同学们都在做什么吧!请根据表格中的信息提示写一篇英语短文,描述你们的课外活动(可适当增加细节),并谈谈你的感想。词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name | Activity | Place |
Lucy | 弹钢琴 | in the music room |
Lily | 练习唱歌 | in the music room |
John | 打篮球 | on the playground |
Sam | 上网(surf the Internet) | in the computer room |
Alice | 阅读 | in the reading room |
Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing!
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【写作提示】
1.主题:同学们在课外活动时间正在进行的活动
2.人称:以第三人称为主
3.时态:现在进行时
4.要点:描述同学们正在哪里进行什么活动、谈论你的感受
5.写作思路:首先点明主题,引出下文对同学们正在做的活动进行介绍;接着具体描述同学们在课外活动时间正在进行的活动;最后表达你的感受,总结全文。
【范文赏读】
Now class is over. It’s time for after-school activities. Let’s see what my classmates are doing!
Lucy is playing the piano in the music room. She likes piano music. Lily is practising singing in the music room to get ready for the school talent show. John is playing basketball on the playground with his friends. What about Sam? He is surfing the Internet in the computer room to get some useful information for his homework. And Alice is reading a book in the reading room. She likes reading and wants to be a writer in the future.
They are all having a good time after school.
(文中黑体部分为亮点词汇或句式)