Unit 1 A new start
写作迁移训练
假如你是李华,学生会给你回了信,就初中生如何充分利用时间提出了两点建议。请根据他们的建议,再写封回信,与他们分享一下你的认识和打算。
要点如下:
1. 表达感谢。
2. 根据建议合理安排时间:列任务清单,优先做最重要的事情;分解任务,逐一完成小任务。
3. 表明信心。
要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯;
3. 词数不少于90(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Students’ Union,
It’s great to hear from you. Thanks a lot for your advice and help.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作提示】
1. 主题:恰当的学习方法与策略
2. 体裁:应用文(信件)
3. 人称:以第一人称为主
4. 时态:以一般将来时为主,穿插使用一般现在时
5. 要点:表达感谢、合理安排时间的方式、对初中学习生活的信心
6. 写作思路:先表达感谢,再具体阐述如何利用好时间,最后表达对初中生活的信心
【范文赏读】
Dear Students’ Union,
It’s great to hear from you. Thanks a lot for your advice and help.
Now I know it’s normal for us to have these problems at junior high, so I am not worried about myself too much. I learn to make plans to solve the problems I’m facing. According to your advice, I’m going to do the following two things. First, I will list my tasks and the time for each task. And I will do the most important thing first when there are too many tasks at the same time. Second, if the project takes long, I plan to turn it into small ones and work on them one by one. In a word, I’ll work hard and try my best.
I hope everything goes well and I’m sure that I will make progress. Thank you so much!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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