Unit 7
写作迁移训练
假设你是李华,最近收到了英国笔友Michael的求助邮件,请你仔细阅读邮件后给Michael回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for help.
As you know, my mom’s birthday is next Friday. This year, I want her to have a different birthday party. But when and where will be the best choice (选择) for the party? Who should I invite? How can I make it special? There are so many things I should think about! I don’t know what to do now. Could you give me some advice?
I’m looking forward to (盼望) your reply.
Michael
要求:
1.语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯,书写工整;
2.80词左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Michael,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作提示】
1.主题:安排生日聚会
2.人称:第二人称
3.时态:一般现在时
4.要点:聚会的时间、地点、方式、活动等
5.写作思路:第一段阐明自己赞同Michael的观点,赞同为妈妈准备一次特别的生日聚会,第二段详细给出自己的建议,第三段祝聚会时玩得开心。
【范文赏读】
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you want to prepare a special birthday party for your mother. It’s a great idea!
Your mother’s birthday is on Friday. Why don’t you have the party on Friday evening at your home? You don’t go to school and your parents don’t go to work on Saturday. You can enjoy yourselves at the party. I think you can invite your grandparents and your aunt and uncle to the party. You can take a family photo. You can also make birthday noodles with eggs for your mother because long noodles mean long life in China.
Wish you have a good time next Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua
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