Starter Welcome to junior high!
写作迁移训练
假如你是英国交换生玛丽,在中国学习。为了了解新同学,你阅读了班级同学们的信息卡,并且成功结交了一位好朋友。现在,你给远在英国的爸爸妈妈写封电子邮件介绍自己的新朋友,邮件包含信息卡以及好朋友分享给你的内容。
| Name: Li Meng | Age: 13 | Character: quiet, friendly |
From: Chengdu | Hobby: reading, listening to music | Advantage: helpful | |
Share your latest summer holiday: ... |
要求:
1. 短文应包含信息卡上的全部内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯;
3. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I have got a new friend at school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作提示】
1主题:介绍他人
2. 体裁:应用文(电子邮件)
3. 人称:第三人称
4. 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
5. 要点:先介绍基本信息,再介绍性格、爱好及暑假经历等
6. 写作思路:首句写自己交了新朋友,中间部分介绍新朋友的具体情况,结尾写自己的感 受和希望
【范文赏读】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I have got a new friend at school. I’m very happy to introduce her to you.
Her name is Li Meng, and she is from Chengdu, Sichuan Province. She is 13 years old with
long and black hair. She looks very cute, and her smile is bright and warm. Besides, she is really interested in reading and enjoys listening to music. We all think she is quiet and friendly. She is very helpful, so she gets on well with everyone. And you know what? She learned to swim this summer holiday. Just like me! So next time, maybe we can go swimming together.
All in all, I’m very happy to have a new friend like her.
(文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式)