【写作迁移训练】
写作提示:1. 补全标题;
2. 说明原因;
3. 你的感受。
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【写作提示】
1.主题:介绍朋友
2.人称:以第三人称为主
3.时态:一般现在时
4.要点:朋友的品质、朋友对你的帮助、你在交往中的收获、你对友谊的理解
5.写作思路:开篇点明朋友的品质,接着用事例来证明他/她的品质,最后升华主题,写出你对友谊的理解。
【范文赏读】
Honesty makes David my true friend
David is honest with me, so he becomes my true friend.
He never tells lies. When I make a mistake, he will point it out. With his help, my grades have improved a lot. Besides, he always keeps his promise. If he promises to support me, he will surely do it. This makes me count on him and trust him very much.
I think a true friend is not just one who plays with you, but someone who is honest. So I advise you all to make honest friends.
(文中加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式)